As my light becomes dark

I intertwine my words and vision into woven light

Saturday, August 21, 2010

Love Stands Still

I sit and wait
Watching as the sun comes calling
I sit and wait
Lost amongst the feelings of hate
New love cushions the heart when falling
The soul, patient for its calling
I sit and wait

2 comments:

  1. Thank you for your comment. I love connecting with other writers. I like your poem; I'm not usually patient enough to write structured poems, so good job! I look forward to reading more from you!

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  2. Oh thank you, I have one week left of completing a course in Poetry which I have done with my friend. You hsould check out her stuff, she is brilliant. Anyway I was never a structed writer at all, and this has beeeennnnnn hard hard work!!! By the way, apart from my friend you are my first official follower....hahah!!!! Looking forward to reading more of your stuff!!

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